Heaven In A Snowstorm
By Jay Hughes
ISBN 1-929670-49-4
Publisher: Renaissance E Books

Reviewed by Kevin R. Tipple
Rating:

It is amazing what a little inclement weather will do. In Jay's world, a snowstorm brings out the need to fuck everything in sight. Don't look here for a real plot or storyline beyond the obvious in your face sex with minimal character development.

We are first introduced to Tammy in this 110-page novella. Tammy is young and thanks to the blizzard, incredibly horny. Funny how that happens. Snow falls and she is all aroused, home alone, and does not have to go to work. So what's a girl to do? The only logical thing she can. Masturbate like mad in great detail while watching the wind driven snow smack against her glass.

Temporarily satiated, but still somewhat bored and very lonely, she calls her friend Joy. With some stilted flirting dialogue, she eventually coaxes Joy to brave the elements on foot and come over. Joy does, toting coffee and soon finds out jut how grateful Tammy can be.

After Tammy penetratingly rewards Joy's efforts, they eat lunch and then turn about is fair play. As the cold winds below, Tammy and Joy are searching for just the right condiment to pour on Tammy's naked body. They soon settle on cold cream and Joy pulls the full bowl out of the refrigerator. Soon the bowl is empty and the cream is sliding down every nook and cranny of Tammy's body. Tammy orders her firmly to lick it off and soon Joy's tongue is working everywhere, trying to get every drop. Soon, Tammy has a secondary thrill hearing Joy refer to her as "Mistress." This awakens new desires in Tammy that she isn't too sure about.

Unfortunately, this really isn't explored as it could have been. While the characters are rather limited in development, these two do have some potential. The sex up to this point is somewhat arousing, but then things begin to go downhill.

We are introduced to Robbie, Joy's husband who is stuck on the road in St. Louis. But, he isn't lonely as he has found a very willing desk clerk and as we meet them, Robbie has his cockhead firmly planted deep inside Lisa's pussy. She is enthusiastically providing good room service as he deeply rides into her. Okay, so far, so good.

But then Lisa just amazingly happens to have a coworker that wants to fuck Robbie. Of course, she has huge tits and hasn't been with a man in two years. She does not know a thing about Robbie other than he looks good to her eye and she has to bang him. Of course they do and of course a good time is had by all, over and over again.

The novella continues to spiral downhill from there. A plane crashes and the survivors are just fine and of course, they want to fuck. There isn't a character in here that does not get laid. More and more people are added for the sole purpose of having them fuck. After awhile, all this mindless fucking leads to reader boredom as one struggles to slop through a jism covered wasteland.

This novella turns into a dripping orgy mess as different people are added and taken away. Some people continually change sexual partners while others develop more long lasting relationships. Some relationships slowly end in a dribble, while others evolve slightly and change, becoming better defined and maybe stronger. But the character development is amazingly limited, for the most part, as these characters only exist to get laid.

For those of you that prefer the amateur style quickie tapes that are so prominent today, this will be right up your alley. Mindless sex, virtually no basis in reality or fantasy, almost non-existent character development are all the hallmarks of this work. But, if you want meaningful plot, story development, characters that exist beyond description of their physical attributes, then don't look here.

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